All Comments on 'The Bridge Came'

This kind of a "fantasy" can only be written by someone who is truly warped.

You must be a woman what the 3 did for months is cheating,:payback for wimp cheaters is justified.You should know a dark secret if discovered by the partner deserves a retribution.

Story wasn't much to write home about, either.

What she did is cheating. Hubby got revenge and put a stop to it. His only other option was kick her to the curb. I think she was very fortunate.

Garbage of the lowest standard.

What was the result? Little pedestrian crossings?

Writing about a real bridge would have been a lot more entertaining than this and a lot more erotic too.

Find another hobby, you suck at writing

To all the wimp cucks who are unhappy that the man was strong, took charge, and won, I say: ha ha wimps, maybe you should stand up to the bitches in you life.

I enjoyed the husband taking control and managing the cheating wife very nicely. She was off guard and she was made to feel the humiliation and pain she had brought to her husband.

and the bridge left. You need to get an editor to go over your stories for correct spelling and making sure you are useing the correct words. The story line was a little weak also.

A fun fill hot story not deep but sexy I think that's what this site is about!!!! But some come here looking for the great novel. Screw them write your stories and let those of us who enjoy them do so. Thanks for a good read!!!!!!!!!

He can't have sex one night a week and it's because she's fucking a dildo? I skimmed through this it was so bad.

I just took the story at face value and thought it was a fun revenge type of story. A lot like a fantasy, but putting his wife through a lot of hell.

That's why I think of it as a fantasy, no man would ever get away with what he did.

Thanks for the read.

...you'd a had something. But you had to get all lovey-dovey at the end.And the pregnancy. Killed it.

Fun story with a little bit of everything.

Well done

Both seem determined to hurt people one way or another -

She was none too bright about her choices (none of them were) and he is just a bit too callus about his actions -

But a good read and a fascinating premise -

then sit back and wait for residuals. TK U MLJ LV NV

murphy's law applies; if a worthless writer can exist, u do

And now is the proud parent of two lovely little viaducts!

What sort of fool raises another man's bastard?

I think he was a total asshole. The possibility that his wife was fucking around, had him thinking divorce, but he is ok with fucking all his wife's friends, using blackmail. She should get her hubby into some panties, then have all the girls fuck him and threaten to post the video. Better yet have all the hubbies of the wives fuck him, that would be poetic justice.

This is one of the most ridiculously stupid stories I've read on here. Are you mentally challenged?

I would have sent the video to each of the husbands anyway

I hope all the other husbands find out what he was doing and beat him into a pile of mush.