All Comments on 'The Bridge Club Ch. 02'

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Anonymousover 8 years ago

bridge club ch. 02

What the hell is this crap:

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I don't think I've ever seen this in literature before.

The story line? Poor and slow.

This isn't a chapter, it's a prelude to lousy writing.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

keep it going

keep the tension slowly building up

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Really Like It

Just discovered your stories and I'm hooked. I like your writing and see lots of possibilities with the characters.

Marklynda2 over 1 year ago

Another good building chapter. Looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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