All Comments on 'The Bridge Club Ch. 06'

This story is not only well written, but believable. I love/hate that you leave me waiting, but glad that you don't make me wait very long for the next chapter.

I have to agree about the story being well written. After this chapter I was just forced, forced I say, to give you five stars and well deserved. I find myself thinking it is too bad there are only four, or is it five women to seduce, but then again seduction is not really what Norm is all about. He has a mission and it is showing how much better a person he is than the crude, brutish, unfeeling neanderthal like male that Massimo is. At some point all the "girls" should take note (s).

Sidney43, I can tell you that Chapters 7-9 are on their way. I had to smile when I read your comment about the number of girls ...

Really loving this series. Keep up the good work!

One little continuity issue.

"I took Abigail back to her place."

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"She kissed me on the cheek, and smiled at me. Then she turned to go. But she stopped at the door. Good luck with Christina. I'll be rooting for you two."

If they are at Abigail's place, then surely she stays and our protagonist goes?

Really nice juxtaposition between the nice guy during nefarious pursuits. I was really waiting for the final chapter to announce the bet. This was a nice surprise and increases my interest. I also really like the character develoment. This theme has been done before but this seems to be a good refreshing new look at it. Nice job and thanks for sharing your work.

When the gf roots for u its almost a sure thing.

Aren't the girls going to figure it out at some point? At least figure out that these two new guys are going through their circle of friends? You'd think that would make it harder, but then again, maybe none of them want to be completely left out and ignored.

It does pay to be a nice guy and they really don't always lose. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.