All Comments on 'The Brother's Wife'

Hope there is more where that came from. Thank you.

I loved this you write very well!

Your words are exciting, interesting and arousing!

I've already sent in the second chapter to this. It is currently being reviewed. I had to scramble to come up with a storyline for them. But, I love the feedback, didn't know people would like it.

Someone with only 5 acres would not have had a bedroom, let alone one with a door, or cotton clothes. Those were luxuries. One room shack and wool clothes.

Wait for it. I take my time writing in the nuances of my characters and what brought them into their current situations. She wasn't always a farmer's wife, it wasn't always just 5 acres.

My brother had an affair with my wife for over 16 years along with several others.she estimates aprox 1800 times altogether.I only found out a few months ago.We are still together although the pain can get overwhelming at times.Just the thoughts that this submission elicits has me crying right now.Affairs with family members are devastating to say the least!

I look forward to what follows

Good premise.

Not nearly enough buildup.

Sex is too profunctory. Too rapid. Starts too abruptly. Finishes too soon.

Three stars.