by JimBob44
love the story but you use the same names or simular names so it got a little confusing
It was a very cute story and I can't wait to read the rest.
Great character development, a lot of people makes it a bit confusing, but more interesting in the long run I assume.
Ok, this is absolutely great stuff!! Still getting used to the switching between couples but it has the added benefit of not getting bored reading a long segment on characters I might not be interested in. Bookmarked and ready for the next chapter, write on! :)
Warning: Ends with bloody violence and lots of senseless death. If this upsets you, like it does me, be warned.
Romance in all of its many stages. A good start of a promising story, very well thought out and written. I look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.