by ryan_devry
Is it possible that in time Leander can become a gentler person (it was hinted at when Jonas sucked his cock)? Maybe in time, Leander will grow a bit of golden chest hair, and even return the favor of sucking Jonas' cock? You did say that Jonas sucked his cock again and again over the years.
Excellent. Very erotic with the two protagonists each having some depth. I like the uncertainty you've worked into the story. There is a gray area that I hope you explore in another chapter!
Love the foreshadowing and inner voice of the protagonist.. He is quite funny and the story is very realistic in the sense of his parents reaction and the fear he still had and uncertainty after he gave Leander a bj plus how teachers can be obvious to protecting the less athletic/unpopular kids..can't wait to read the next installment!
In glad Jonas got to suck s cock. It just cemented in his mind that he was a cock sucking faggot. I know the feeling well.
Great start, I'm loving the relationship between the two of them! Can't wait to read more!
Man that story was hot as hell and that cliffhanger I am loving it
This story really turned me on. You captured the dynamic between the two main characters brilliantly. I loved the fact that Jonas suspected he was a cocksucker, which was only confirmed when Leander's cock was presented to his face. Really hot!!
Well written and great dynamic of two young virile guys possibly discovering their sexuality. I loved the descriptions, the mouth fucking, Leander's sweaty balls on the chin, the scent and feeling of his pubes pushing into Jonas' face. This is pure lust and is setting up one horny teenager to really want to recapture the tastes and smell's of a horny buddy's male crotch in his face again. I look forward to more exploration with other classmates and experiencing the different sweaty cocks & balls after PE class and the different scents and tastes of their young cum exploding in Jonas' mouth as he further explores his newly found cock sucking desires.