All Comments on 'The Bus'

Hello Willow37

Really enjoyed the story and it heightened the senses. It had a great simplicity about it with a real erotic and pleasurable sense of it actually taking place. Looking forward to some more material. I liked the way you handled the 'male' view, away from the stereotypical 'wham/bam'.

Yours pleased

David

"He entered her slowly, agonizingly. Ever so slowly he lifted her and felt the desire of being within her beautiful body envelop him."

A sweet seductive and sensual way to discribe what it all was comming down to.

Very good -- would love to hear more from you.