All Comments on 'The Bus Ride'

by JerodJ

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Keep it rolling......

I thought it was a great beginning. So then, now what?! 😌

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great start!

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more! Don't let other get you down on their negatively about this story. It takes gut to create a stories and posted them here. So pat yourself on your back for doing so! Thank you for taking your time to share with us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It borders on rape. Not a good thing to be writing about, this is subjugation of women which is clearly not a good thing to do. The idea is good, but to present a women as being groped by stranger, when this is not her choice is WRONG!

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