All Comments on 'The Bus Trip'

This was actually a gentle, happy, almost love story. Thanks.

One of the best uses of the non-consent theme I have seen. Good job.

That was great. :)

Now write an alternative where we can see what would have happened if she *had* gone to seat 17B. ;)

A really great story. Great use of the theme. I would love to see more of what happens to Suzy and Steve over break and the next semester.

It was concluded perfectly, but please continue the trip.

so gallant

Lets get a part 2 please