All Comments on 'The Butterfly Effect Pt. 02'

Anxious for the next chapter.

It seems that your story could end either in a good or a bad way. From a polyamorous relationship between the four of them to two bad divorces or wounded marriages. We can only hope that you were in a good mood when you wrote it!

It is well written and interesting, anyway.

I absolutely love your stories however the use of gods and toasts is killing it for me. French toast is just that. Not french toasts and gods should be used only when speaking of multiple gods. Not gods that was good. Drives me nuts. If you are using and editor, please replace that person.