by cinnamyn
Interesting start. Opinion depends on where you take it. I am personally hoping it will not be spiraling negativity. The back story sounds interesting as well.
Casually dismissive, manipulative and devious - hmmmm, I don't think I like Mark at all...
He's her pimp. The poor girl doesn't even realize it. If only he was a fourth as devoted to her as she is him. Sad.
Abduction and kidnapping isn’t sexy, it’s terrifying. Story could have been hot except for the fact that’s this is a non-con story.
This stuff happens to real women daily. This story gave me the creeps.
I like my submissives consenting to play.
This story rocked me back on my heels as I am not familiar with BDSM. However, I like the way it is framed. Anna appears to have no say in her destiny and yet she is getting exactly what she wants.