All Comments on 'The Buyer Ch. 08'

Another great chapter. Hopefully there will be more chapters to come.

meant to give you 1.Transaction completed. All this chapter boils down to is "Pimp you gonna pimp her out again?" "Maybe.""Cool let me know if you do." That's what they are. Abuser and abuser. Or maybe pimp and john. Certainly neither are worthy of Master, Sir, or Dominate.

if this was your last chapter I wish there would of been more to it at least when she got home have her and her master talk even if she was crazy and wanted to stay I guess hope there is more so to get ending

So the month is over and the asshat wants to be all smiley and inquiring and gosh wasn't everything I did to you so nifty? Male bovine excrement. I have a very slim hope that her master (note lower case) will seriously talk to her about what happened during the month. I, for one, do not believe the asshat only skirted the edges of the rules. Damage takes many forms. Working to turn her into a pain slut when she was a 'rental' and not naturally oriented that way is damage. Now, if she goes on to seek pain from her master (m) and he is a hoo-boy goody-goody! I will replacing cracked device screens.

Oh dear, a slave communicates with her Master ...trust! His job is to protect that slave and the whole thing was a huge fail here. So she isn't going to tell him that the contract was broken and she was horribly abused? It's bad enough that she wasn't checked in with during his absence,but this is just too much. Bad ending for so many reasons. You have talent, but this story was just sad, frustrating and disappointing. You did evoke a response and they say that's a sign of talent so... Please please give some kind of closure here where the slave communicates and the buyer is taken to task. Ack

THERE NEEDS TO BE CLOSURE!!!!!!

Those assholes need to SUFFER!!!

keep writing

I loved this story! Hope you’re still writing!