All Comments on 'The Cabin Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
vines

very good story mike

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
me likey!!

Mmmm...yummy story! I could so see this continuing... please say you will!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
so sexy!

I loved this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That was.... extreme

Not saying the story wasn't good, it's just that I wasn't expecting it to go in that direction. Good story nonetheless

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Like the story, looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Delicious

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Lovely story. I hope there will be more featuring Blaire.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW! truly a sensual experience!

Hi, I have a very vivid imagination and when a writer creates something that interests me and has enough detail, I am submerged into the world they created.

Such is the case with this story, I could imagine I was that girl, and I could feel every wonderful thing she felt as if it was real. Thank you for painting that picture for me, I loved every delicious moment of it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
"her cock bulged obscenely"

Ew.

verbicideverbicideover 8 years ago
Ha!

Reading this, all I could think of was that bit from the show "Archer" concerning tentacle porn: "Really, how is this even a genre?"

The tale is well written, but I couldn't approach it from the proper standpoint, I guess.

horned_lizardhorned_lizardover 8 years ago
A few minor mistakes, overall very good

It's very difficult to find urethra stretching porn. I am very pleased to have found this one.

My only critiques are small ones. The second time you mentioned how far away anyone else lived from the cabin was changed to 5 miles from 10.

I'm a fan of hyper but there comes a point where even in fiction it strains credulity. Cock thicker than she is? Unless her bone structure changes, it's a bit of a flaw.

I hope her new cock urethra gets stretched and her balls inflated, auto fellatio deepthroat, autopenetration, self-nipple fuck. Mmmmm, that's my jam.

Maybe urethra fisting and unbirthing?

RavenPayneRavenPayneover 8 years ago
Where is an alien plant when you need one?!

I loved this, well written, rolls along nicely and very visual.

Deansgirl1999Deansgirl1999over 6 years ago
More please

This is too good to stop here.

taco1085taco1085almost 6 years ago
wow

now for the next chapter, that is good.... cant wait to read the other chapters....

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Great start. Weird at first but tons of fun and potential

ConmacConmac10 months ago

I absolutely looooooved this. The size expansions got a little confusing at times but still was great. Absolutely loved loved loooooooooved when she was first taken by the plant. The description of arousal and her basically loosing her mind before the penetration was just wow. That hooked me so good.

PurplefizzPurplefizz6 months ago

Good fun! It’d have been hilarious to see a tag for β€œHerbisexuality” on this story, as usual the cumflation is completely ott, but hey that ok, looking forward to seeing if Blair germinates another plant at some point, either by herself or via another girly host. Nicely done! 5⭐️

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