All Comments on 'The Cabin Ch. 01'

It got tedious.. I liked it but it needed to be polished.. The only real fuckups I noticed were sentence fragments.. (ooooooooh)

I'm liking where this is going. I'm hoping the mention of a MILF Mom is foreshadowing something more in that regard?

Where do we go from here?

I'm pretty sure the MILF comment was a way of making fun of Jared's eagerness. Kari does have a sister, Derricks mother. Just enough information to mislead.

and I am so looking forward to some more, soon please

If this story does not cause a rising reaction, then you must either be drugged or already dead! More, please!?!

Wow now that is a teaser. Great so far.

See above

well, its got the start of something interesting. kinda figured part of it. wonder if mom and dad might get involved? keep it going, I see three or four more chapters easy.

Nice little teaser, looking forward to seeing how it plays out :-)

Promising start.

Your best trick? Humor! Laughing while getting aroused is a winner!

One of the best at setting up a story. Can't wait to read chapter 2

Great job, can't wait to read the entire story!

Freakin Hot Dude! I had an aunt that looked that good but never got the chance.

Great build up. Enjoyed every line.

I come on this site for some fun. You are very good at fun, romance. Thx

Looking forward to the time in the cabin. They have a relationship that could turn into something else. Bravos

nice start way to short 4

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

"The Cabin Ch.01:" - Twenty Year Old Collegian Nephew, Derrick Davidson and Twenty-five Year Old Single Aunt, Kari.

At least two things that appear in this story makes me know that I'm going to love it: 1) I'm from adjacent to the Fabulous Land-of-the-Sky Smokies in the largest town in North Carolina west of Charlotte/Winston Salem--and 2) also still own for over forty-five years a three-story, four bedroom, three bath "cabin" (and of the six houses/homes I've ever owned and never homesteaded nor lived in full-time) is on the largest inland lake within the State of Michigan.

Additionally, I relish stories of pure unadulterated incest between a female and male, blood-kin and DNA related, exuding obvious love and romance, scattered with humor and levity! These attributes make for absolute and emotional respect for the lovers, excellent feel-good reading and enjoyment.....and bestows from me the utmost appreciation to the writer/authors of such literary fare!

Loved the back and forth banter, nice start. 5*