All Comments on 'The Cabin Ch. 02'

Fantastisex. Cant wait for next

Your story just went super HOT . Thank you ..

Oh God don't stop fucking her. She is one hot sexy lady. I hope her and derrick are together forever. She deserves a man her will love her unconditionnaly.

I love that the second chapter wasn't a quick one pager like the first chapter and that the sex was fucking hot! Can't wait for chapter three!!

chapter 2 was awesome. witty and sexy.

chapter 3 make derrick pound that sexy ass of kari's to submission!!

hit so many buttons that i think i ran out of buttons...wowser!

Very much looking forward to the next chapter. I do enjoy your details, and hope to see more of your writings soon.

feels like being in the scene with them.

WW

Will their family?

Regardless of what happens in the hot tub or bedroom, it all changes when his mother her sister joins them

You're doing a great job. Nice humor, characters are really good. Keep up the great work!

I love a well developed story and this has to be in of the better ones I have read in a while amazing work can't wait to read chapter 3.

"Every guy on the planet should have a Tuesday like I had. Let me ask you this: have you ever stumbled out of bed, wondering if the last night had been a dream, moseyed into the kitchen and seen a goddess wearing one of your tee-shirts that didn't even begin to cover her ass standing at the stove making you French Toast? If not, you've led a pitiful life and I feel sorry for you in some small way. "

Best. Paragraph. Ever.

Through the years I have enjoyed a lot of stories on this site. Some decent and arousing, some pretty bad. But once in a while you find a gem in between all the new releases that just captivates you. The combination of a terrific build-up, proper grammar, arousing plot, but very importantly also a great sense of humor, makes this story so far one of my alltime favorites! I can't wait to read more, please keep up the good work!

I totally wishing I had an aunt like you!! Love the story please keep them cumming.

You have a great story line going. Keep up the great work!

My mind boggles with possibilities. Whatever next? Can't wait for the next installment. You have a fantastic way with words. More please.

You have a real command of language; "Seriously, the neighbors had a cigarette after she came" is one of the best lines I've ever read and I laughed out loud at it. Keep this up for sure.

for the next chapter!!!

3 stars is all I ever give anal. I'm not gay...

So Kari has a well paying job already and gathered some sexual experience but our guy here decides to be the alpha male and to take charge. I think the author has missed the meaning of that term. Being the alpha male does not automatically translate into being the alpha person! Plus, it's not your unilateral decision that makes you the leader of a group. As much as I detest the blooming pseudo feminism which is discernible by its fascistoid misandry and the quest for female dominance, the idea to be the dominant part just because of being the male is equally ridiculous. It always leaves me with the impression of a man who is insecure of himself and rather immature. Why would someone like Kari chase for something like that? If this was just a short story to get off on I wouldn't really mind that much...

I liked it

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

The way you've written this story it's almost like watching the movie Ferris Bueller's Day Off when the MC talks to us about something or another. Loved it... and the sex is kind of nice too, lol.