All Comments on 'The Cabin Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Perfect!!! like always

This story is sooooo gooood .....im looking foward for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Well written

This is another amazing story you've written. Are you an actual author?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Pure art

The way you write is truly an art form, honestly, you should open up a patron account, I would sponsor you in a heart beat...

Keep up the good work, looking forward to more

Benzguy280Benzguy280almost 8 years ago
Need more

Oh no you an not stop here with the story. We need to know what happens next. How will Blair will seduce Alice, Ashley and Diane? Then when she will get Riley. Well written good flow and description keep it cumming!

UnanonymousUnanonymousover 7 years ago
So good!!!

Man I came so hard all over the bottom of my desk! I love this story, please update. I didn't know other people had this fetish, I'm so happy you write for this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
AWESOME STORY

MOOREE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please more

great story so far can wait to read more:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
THE BEST

Can BLAIR hie the goth girl a dick and huge balls like her.HER MOM AND THE GOTH GIRL PLS

LootGamingNickLootGamingNickover 7 years ago
please continue

This is one of my favorite series. It saddens me to see it stagnant. I would love to.read the continuation of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Please Continue

This story is great and I'd love see how it progresses. When are you writing the next part?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Part 5?

This is an old story and hasn't been updated in a long time, but I think it still deserves an update. I reread it every now and again and wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Continue please

I love the story you have created, I was not aware of the story or website until recently but now that I have I love it. I want more but don’t demand it, please continue the story I am interested to know how it ends. Thanks for reading my message.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Finished? Thank You!!

Thank you for quitting while behind. The story was going in stupid circles getting sillier every paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fun storyline. Good pacing. Looking forward to six chapters or more.

Yankee English and idioms rather than British might be appropriate.

NobleKorhedronNobleKorhedronalmost 3 years ago

Please continue this - it's good...

OpthimusOpthimusover 2 years ago

Great story but to little incest imo

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thanks for this story. I'd like to read more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked the story and am wondering if that is the ending. Also there are a few Spelling Errors.

oesophagus = esophagus page 2 chapter 1 page 4 chapter 2 page 5 chapter 2

page 3 chapter 4 page 3 chapter 4 page 3 chapter 4

bowling bowl = bowling ball page 2 chapter 1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I would like to see where this goes please keep making these I love reading them

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