by kotor248
Very, very well written.
You captured the superficial emotions of submission and lay them out in words.
Great story. Looking forward to more.
And, for a first submission to Literotica, quite outstanding. I do so hope you will write and share much more with us. Thank you, welcome, and please have five stars,
Your writing is fantastic, I was turned on right to the end. Keep it coming !
Yes, you made it! Very sensual, lovely. Your talent shines through no worries. Now I must catch up with you to be in time; a worthy high mark you set there. I must try hard.
Im canadian so the cold bits make me shudder... Must not be as cold there as here :)
5* just for the great writing. And a bonus star if i could for drawing Nommy out. He hates femdom but keeps reading it. Go figure. Love you Nommy!
Easily five stars. At first I wasn't sure about taking him out in the snow, but that was so erotic especially when She fucked him. Then bringing him back inside, covering him up and riding him...Hot stuff!