All Comments on 'The Cage Pt. 04'

I've strangely enjoyed this series. It's just the right amount of fantastical. Just one thing that I found wrong with this one was how he responded to her in the shower even though he had a gag in his mouth. Hope to see more from you.

You sure haven't made a case for any type of mind control. Not enough time for a type of stockholm syndrom. So this whole mess just seems implausible. UGH!

Nice edition;

you've made an error with that "gag" -

but I guess mistakes happens to those that are 'do-ers'! :P :D

But looking at context - it's excellent.

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You should continue to write stories you have a special talent, they really are masterpieces.