All Comments on 'The Canadian Trip'

Please get an editor.

Things like "That spread her out up punt her pussy level with my mouth" do your writing no favors.

At 69, anytime a story gets me hard, I know I really like it and this one did. It seems like, it could continue in a variety of ways and I hope it does.

Yes, it could use some proof reading to catch items like the one noted above, but pales in comparison to the imagery and flow of the story as presented.

Thanks