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All Comments on 'The Captives Ch. 01'

by Cndrlla69

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rkieran2rkieran2almost 11 years ago
Good start

Great writing, loved this first chapter. Can't wait to hear the backstory on the characters you have introduced.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well done..very erotic.

Well done..very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow

Arousing, erotic, taboo... I want more of this

writerjabwriterjabalmost 11 years ago
Reminds me of Conan

But with the sweet taste of incest -- fantastique!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Rocked!!!!

This was an amazing story. Can't wait for chapter 2!!!

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