All Comments on 'The Car Ride'

Enjoyable, not only because of the twist but also because it was well written.

It was hot, not too many mistakes so well done. Would love part 2 and hearing all about slutty little Michelle lol

I love riding-on-Lao stories and this one is great! It addressed the implausible notion that the driver could be oblivious to the sights, sounds and smells of back seat fucking. And the retelling of the tale while the parents fucked was awesome. Can’t wait to see if Michelle has the same reaction as mom did! 5*s

Reread your stories before posting next time. On first page when discussing kids it says his slightly younger daughter, instead of either our slightly or changing it to sister

Nice build up, great incestuous sex. Now the obvious ,,, the daughter.

I'm ready for part two when they take daughter to school .

Great twist on a familiar tale. Well written too. Would love to see you explore the endless possibilities.

I too love riding on lap stories. I especially liked this one as the father/husband wasn't a complete clueless idiot like in other stories. I don't care how quiet you are, you can't fuck two feet from your husband while he's awake in a confined space like a truck or a car without him knowing. Five stars and a favorite point!

Thank you for your feedback so far. Those that mentioned it either here or privately through e-mail are absolutely right. I made a pretty big blunder when I indicated early in the story that Chris is Michelle's "daughter." I should have done more editing beyond the editing I did do to catch that. I'll be more diligent next time.

Very hot story, loved having both perspectives of it and the first part being from the dad who usually in that type of story is none the wiser. Hope you continue it and we get to see some other adventure between the family.

Nicely written. Loved the twist on the old formula.

I want more of this in so many ways.... and since you left the door open to it with several hints, pregnancies are certainly welcomed.

Great writing

Pls continue with next parts - Michelle's adventures

And then may be family time

Absolutely loved this! Well done!

You have to keep this going do daddy daughter next then when they arrive the four of them then in walks roommate and ra and others and family stranger college gangbang finaly :)

If you do write a sequel maybe it could be from the daughters point of view. She would not know that the mother already knows and anguish over the thought of cheating with her mother's husband.

Nice perspective on the norm. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

is there still hope for a second part?

I love “riding on lap” stories too and this one was really good. Looking forward to the follow up chapter with Michelle!

So is Jennifer going to drive?

LeB

Oh my fuck that was hot! Bravo dude

amazing story. loved the change in point of view from the usual mom or son telling the story.

Yo please do part 2 with michelle

(11/12/2022) Well this was a fresh take on the old back seat lap screwing road trip story. Five stars. Well done.

Maybe a fresh take and more legit but still unrealistic no dad is going to stand by and allow his wife to fuck his son it's on legit in the way that you're not going fuck someone in the back seat without everyone else not knowing everything else was unrealistic which killed the momentum of the story

Ok would be a good fantasy story if it wasn't written so far out of the realm of being realistic you should have wrote where there is some conflict and everything not making the mom/wife a two bit slut and the husband a no man little cuck bitch

Omg this is a horny story! Just the narrative I wish those other "Ride on my son's lap in a crowded car" tales would be: Dad's invested, aware, thrilled and happy, and it only boosts their sex life together.

Thank you so much for your effort.

In my head Mom does go ahead and fuck Sonny again, with Dad winning the fruits of their coupling, so to speak.

I get it is incest but fucking the husband as well was over the top and just ruined it for me no 1 wants to about another dick involved