All Comments on 'The Card Trick'

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idope247idope247over 7 years ago
perfect

i love this story....keep it up

mister_C_Deemister_C_Deeover 7 years ago

Nice start.. wondering where it goes ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very Interesting.!!!

Awesome, Very Interesting.!!!

happywriter007happywriter007over 6 years ago
Leave me haning?

The girl tried to be a tease, but you topped that. Where is the rest?

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I'm an amateur card magician, occasional author, and an aspiring designer. Erotica is not my main thing, but I really enjoy reading it and I'm giving it a shot. Send in your feedback, I'd love to get inputs.