All Comments on 'The Carnival'

by Redswitch

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
WOW!

GREAT writing, plot and everything is just PERFECT!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Made me HOT

I really liked the way you wove the story. I would very much like to read more of this couples adventures. You should write another! I would also like to know more of what she looks like.

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