All Comments on 'The Carny Pt. 04'

It sure is picking up and from the sound of that comment it doesn't stop!! Can't wait!!

This is one of the all time greatest stories I have read here and I almost describes my life!! Please make this available in paperback or apple books #loveit

This chapter has maybe the best erotic scene I've read, when Eddie and Roy go skinny dipping for the first time, and Roy puts Eddie at ease about having an erection. This is chapter and the next are the peak of sexual tension for the series, and I come back here often. I've fantasized about their swim so much I almost feel I've been there myself. Thanks for crafting this scene so well.