by Maria2394
A bit of froth and lightness in a literary realm often more grim than sexual, more sadistic than sensuous. Very enjoyable.
Even though this isn't my kind of fantasy, the story telling was so good, I was captured. Especially wonderful to see how you stuck to the slow steady pace so the erotic tension built. Good job.
I enjoyed this romantic and sexy little story - thank you for writing it and bringing it to us. Five stars - well done!
You hit a wonderfully perverse nerve! I loved every word of it!
You built the tension well, even to the surprise ending, and we're left hoping the "new panties" aren't just "granny panties of a different color than white"! :) Well done! One can only wish Dan and Claire well!