All Comments on 'The Cat and the Mouse Ch. 01'

Waiting for more....

Are you fucking kidding me! Who the hell are you. He's not making fun of molestation, he's being taken advantage off and he's scared. And the fact that he's excited is a natural reaction guys have even in serious times. And truthful this is better written then some of the other stuff I saw. So yeah. I think it's good.

5 stars. More please

Don't leave us hanging keep up man.

I usually hate cliff hangers but I'll make an exception in this story.

I like the premise of the whole being tied up part but i feel like its being rushed. But if they're going to have multiple games then i think its worth it. If this story is wham bam, the sex has to be great because there's no real dimension to the characters.

You are off to a great start although this first chapter is short and the pace a bit fast. I like it and look forward to more.