All Comments on 'The Cell Mate Pt. 01'

please post part two as soon as possible, you have a great start and i hope to see more of your work on the site.

I can't wait for part two.

You're off to a great start and I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! Don't keep your new fans waiting long lol!

I really enjoyed the first part of this story and I look forward to the next installment.

I see a world of possibilities here. Take your time and maintain the quality of your writing.

of story, but it is well-written. This is a very interesting story.

Its something new and the approach is awesome and leaves enough to the imagination to have you dreaming. Also wanting to come back and read some more!

OMG I love it !!! The detail you put into it is excellent ! Love the science fiction tentacles lol. I've always loved a good sci fi story, or a good tentacle story, or a good story involving two people helping each other... THIS ONE HITS ALL THREE !!! This is the perfect story for me, Please please please finish it !!!

wooo, this is excellent! write more!

This is a great and unusual story! Please, please, please write more!!!!!

...you really need to continue with this!!

This ended rather abruptly. I loved the story quite a bit.. I want to know what happened after the falling from the wall. What they did and how they got away completely as well as their destiny was.. Please continue this story :)

That was so good - so original & intriguing! Please continue!

I really love the characters in your story as well as the plot. Anxious to read part 2.

Love your story so far, can't wait to read the next few chapters...I'm hooked!

That was awesome. I soooo wanna know how this develops

I read the entire story--it was excellent. I hope you keep writing!

Beyond amazing, please write more!!! <3<3<3

I found I was holding my breath at the last because you have made it so real. The only thing that I didn't like was the ending; I didn't want it to end.... Hope to see the next chapter soon. Thanks

My only bit of criticism is this: if you have someone you can get to edit (beta read) your work before you post it you will have achieved perfection.

Your first story?! A credit to you - twists & turns, fantastic !

This story is the absolute best thing ever. I encountered it years ago and. And back to read it and it's still good. You should try submitting to other places too like Hentai Foundry.

I read the first part several years ago possibly even before the other 3 parts and I am very happy to be able to read the whole story. Good story.

Good, keep it up.