All Comments on 'The CEO's Pet Ch. 02'

Great read.

Read chapter 1 months ago and almost thought u weren't going to continue.

I wish this thing had updates though I've been busy lately too.

Whatever it is, keep up the good work. I'm enjoying it:)

This second chapter was even better than your first. Keep that same style of writing. Simple. Clear. Easy to follow. Too many writers complicate the plot because they think it makes the story more entertaining and interesting but it has that opposite effect. Stories on here aren’t who dunnits. They are erotically orientated entertainment.

Proof read. Very carefully. Then you’ll avoid silly mistakes such as saying that olives arrive in a bowel. Not enough mistakes to spoil the enjoyment but even so try not to make them. It’s been 8 months since this chapter was published during which you’ve published 3 other stories. About time we had the 3rd chapter of this one.

Please continue, it was beautiful