All Comments on 'The Chalet and The Guru'

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colin23colin23over 3 years ago
Very entertaining

I don't usually like incest stories that include inter-generational sex, but this is light-hearted enough to be fun without being repellent. Well done.

Lee2012Lee2012over 3 years ago

Amazing he could read the words with a straigt face! Straight cock is one thing, but the face???? Nasssh

luminawithnosluminawithnosover 3 years ago

What a creative way to setup a character universe and allow for any sort of relation combos. This one was a refreshing break from the typical routine of most incest narratives. I also appreciated the inclusion of same sex couplings since it furthered that sense of being caught in a moment of overwhelming lust. Great work and hope to see more!

TheOtherTeacherTheOtherTeacherover 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your comments!

Thank you all for your comments.

This was always intended to be a light-hearted story, and I hope I got the tone right. I find erotic comedy to be a very difficult to pull off well.

Please check out my other work. I've been using my writing to try and work out WHY someone might become involved in incest. For example, for religious reasons, or for medical reasons (i wrote about a pandemic before it was cool!).

I'm currently working on a story of incest for power - a secret society of influential people (movie stars, business people etc) who use incest in their rituals.

odiaapuaodiaapuaalmost 3 years ago

thanks i always likes this kind of story, where family members fucked each others with very cooperatively passionately lovely way for the reason of religious cult. there is Baba's Tantriks etc. some blind believes... and I fantasies Hero is a Son of the family,or Father of the family.

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Englishman, living and teaching abroad. Update April 2024 - still working, still writing. Focusing more on longer, one-off stories. I aim for my stories to be consistent, to have solid world building and clear, decent plots.