by tw_holt
wonderful story took me back to all those fantasies I had as a young man
're edit to no more than 5 chapter s good story line but so many same as scenes
Would love to read more about their adventures in Charleston.
Though I could have done without the inter-racial stuff, this story was smoking hot.
It's been so long that we had an actual GREAT story posted. Something in the vein of writers like Baron, Alwayswantedto, etc.
Finally!
Great job. I did think it started to get off track with the orgy stuff, don't feel like that was needed.....but I'm not complaining or criticizing. You did a great job and obviously you put a lot of time into this. It shows.
Thank you for posting this!
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It was really easy to get caught up in the emotions Vernon was feeling due his betrayal of his mother. You did a great job of developing the story line and characters not to mention throwing in some twists.
This was one of the better stories I've read. It didn't immediately jump to sex, but rather developed beautifully, slowly, with a good story line. Mother son sex is a huge turn on for me, but I need a storyline/buildup much more than most of the stories here provide. This was excellent. Thank you. I plan to read again.
Good story. The author truly captured the son's emotional conflict and growth. Likewise, I thought that was wonderful that the author let the reader in on the mother's feeling when she was informed of her son's actions and his reactions to the challenges.