All Comments on 'The Change in Melissa Ch. 06'

Call display wOuld show that she called her husband from her cell phone FOR OVER AN HOUR as sh fucked another man. Then to suggest that it was a cross call? How old is Rob? 12?? Because that is the only way he would believe shit like that.

This whole story sucks ass!!!!

Sorry, but can't find anything I like about this cheating wife (s) story...only thing that would help it is if the husband (s) finds out and kicks her (them) to the curb..... Maybe then they could be honest with their spouses and see what happens.

the characters are to dumb showing the author I. Q. of six.

I rarely comment on my story comments - BUT - I am curious as to why readers sho do not approve of married affiars READ my stories? I do enjoy the feedback - I always have but can someone please tell me why? This site is full of erotic stories that fulfull all groups and interests. Why would someone who dislikes infidelity, read stories in this category?

You post these stories for people to read and get some pleasure. Some guys get pleasure by reading cheat stories then flaming. Not sure why you can't understand the 'kink' of a closet cuckold; some people like feet, panties, etc - closet cuckolds like flaming cheat stories to get off. Why else would they keep reading so many chapters?

Closet cuckolds get their jollies just like closet gays get joy from reading Gay Male. Psychologists call this 'reaction formation' and plenty of simpletons just go through life not understanding their own motivations. As long as they get their kicks from your stories, who cares about the underlying psychology?

By your logic, only those predisposed to liking a story are allowed to comment on a story. Neat way of trying to get nothing but raves.

six chapters in so every reader is a cuck or a closet cuck; the flamers are closet cucks and the rest normal cucks. non-cucks would have stopped in chapter 1. a few wannabe cucks might still be around but the flamer closet cases mostly drove away the admitted huecucks.

As best as I can tell, what we are presented with here is a series of MF (mostly) vignettes, loosely tied together by the character 'Melissa'! The monotony of just following Melissa's escapades is alleviated by her Big Sis and a cast of dozens. It is hard to discern a thread of where this is going (except to bed or other surface adequate for getting a piece of the action!)

The vignettes are, without much quibble, hot - for the most part! But this is NOT a story, it is a series of (very) loosely connected flash stories!

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I see you get your kicks from spouting off nonsense on practically every loving wives story. Even though you're anonymous, your style of bullshit is easy to spot. Always the same nonsense about closet cucks. Seems like cucks like you need the attention, why else would you make whimsical statements on every story written here, especially the cuckold stories, which seem to be your specialty. Do us all a favor and stick your swelled head in a bucket of water to cool off, and hopefully maybe drown your sorry ass.

i'll go ahead and bash the other anon to get some triangulation action - "even though you are anon, you are the same peckerless pussy blasting every hot wife story and licking the balls of illiterate nonces and their sad fantasy revenge stories." nice....

... and by the way author, I am not a closet anything, I AM an active and out in the open sociopath who has zippo cuck tendencies and I gave up on this bizarre tale when you failed to inject any realism in it since without some element of realism even a FUCKING FANTASY CANNOT be erotic, (unless you're a pre-pube, eh ?)-BUT I saw a stupid comment or three and wanted to propose a novel hypothesis, that perhaps angry people read about shit THEY HATE to release anger eh?

those of us who get sex regularly (masturbating doesn't count, you fucking wanker) we don't have your anger issues. but since you're reading some crappy chapter on a fuck story site to quell your anger issues, you got more problems than just being a closetfuckincuckold, lol.

Im going to try and avoid the terminal cuckold debate and comment on your stories. I think you write pretty well. The problem that I have is that it has become repetitive. Chapter one reads like chapter 3 that reads like chapter 6. After awhile I think the average person disconnects with Melissa and it ceases to be erotic.One last comment in regards to this. I believe it becomes a bit to unrealistic (I know this is fiction) for anybody to believe that Melissa would still have a husband given the circumstances. Why would she want one? Obviously he's not doing it for her or she wouldn't be doing what she's doing. Its becomes a parody of itself. Like I said I think you write pretty well I just think that this set of stories has seen its day

Readers might be surprised how true this story is, at least from the writers point of view.

...big deal.

To all the Anon commenters - please do not use this forum to fight about who has what issues. I just commented (which I rareky do) because I was curious. I take the positive and the negative well and with stride. I am not always crazy about the onse that promise me physical harm.

ALSO - these are true stories - with some changes (names always). The exception is Ch.3 when I go to the clinic - that does not exist and is pure fantasy. I really do want to be a faithful wife and my sisters and my mom (did) have the same problems. I write because it makes me feel better about my transgressions.

guys with working cocks! if'n ya got no lead in yer pencil, get some viagra mate! once you've laid a few cute birds you'll regret remaining a virgin for so long. sex with a real girl is vastly underrated.

Melissa, as always, you tell a great story and am always glad of what you have to share. All I could say is that I wish our paths crossed when you lived up here. Is that park and ride on the south service road in the 40's? Was glad to hear that the clinic didn't exist because I would have loved to be a patient. Keep telling us more, and stop feeling bad for who you are.

To answer your question. Who Knows !. Everyone reads what they read for a different reason

The loving wife section is a mixed bag , UN like say incest you pretty much know what your going to get.

The most highly rated stories in the LW category are revenge stories. stories like yours that make a mockery

of marriage are going to get low scores and nasty comments. It's just the way it is.

I generally pick the stories I read from the comments section. I read your comment that your stories were

true and it piqued my interest. So I read each chapter. Now you said you write to make yourself

feel better about your cheating. Wow, you would have to explain that one !

I will say your stories suspend believe.

Let's start with Mom. Mom cheated on Dad for over 20 years and their still together. hard to believe.

I guess the question is why. She obviously has not respect for him.

Ok In chapter 1 you have a affair with Jim for over 2 Months. You see him 2 or 3 time a week for sex.

How do you look in Alan's eyes and not confess. Woman to woman I don't see how.

The day he came home and found you and Jim having Sex. I would say you and Jim are very lucky

he did not kill you both. seriously it happens all the time.

I would love to hear about the after math. I am sure he no longer trusts you and he most likely wanted

to know where you are every minute of every day. My guess is he went to lawyer and found out he

was screwed and not in a good way. So he stayed with you.

In chapter 2 the fact that your daughter said she did not like her teacher. as a mother would have send red flags

up for me. Again I would like to have been a fly on the wall when you arrived home that night. How did you explain your

your appearance ? again suns pens believe.

Robin watches her mother not only have sex but cheating on her father. That could put someone

in therapy for life ! That would explain why she is so screwed up.

Last 2 things what grow woman would get in a van with a stranger and have un protected sex. No one is that stupid.

The hand job Please 16 year old girl's hand job's to avoid haveing sex not grown woman.

Kate

Thanks for the comments Kate. Woman to woman - I guess you figured out what was left out of each story, Only females would be atuned to this. I would be happy to fill in the blanks for you sometime if you have time. I hear from men all the time. The women I do hear from are usually as detailed as you. I do have guilt - I really do - writing does help me. I am not ready to confess to my husband because it would hurt him so. Thanks for your honest comments

I've been lurking on Literotica for years, more than long enough to know that the 'Loving Wives' category is NOT about partners that are having mind-blowing sex with each other, but IS about A partner having sex OUTSIDE of the relationship (secretly or not). [Infidelity/cuckolding does not appeal to me, so I normally sail right by this category]

So who reads 'Loving Wives'? Let's see:

1 - someone (new to the site) who thinks it's about wives being physically intimate with their husbands. [Surprise!]

2 - someone whose kink it is to imagine or fantasize about infidelity, cuckolding, femdom (wife), malesub (husband), etc.

3 - someone just trying to find the right material (descriptions of actions, emotions, etc) for ... 'self-gratification'.

4 - someone delving into a category they're normally repulsed by (because of curiosity, something in the title or description that appeals, author, random story spin, cruising new stories, etc), and finding their expectations met, exceeded, or dashed. [Hello! That's me! -- If I was a cat, I'd already have gone thru my nine lives]

5 - someone delving into a category they're normally repulsed by, because they're ...masochists.

Having said all that, let me get to 'the gist of the nub of the crux of the matter'. I read the story on a lark, clicked on the 'All Comments' on a lark, LOL'd, re-read the story and comments, and came to some conclusions:

-- human motivations are complex [I know, 'Duh!]

-- a good story is like a good meal: prepared with skill, and care, and love, it satisfies taste, nourishes the body, and keeps mind and soul together

-- a good meal (and a good story) should have a tasty dessert: the comments on your story, and your poise-filled responses, have been a wonderful 'dessert'

I don't like the 'Loving Wives' category, but I loved what I read today ('You're a good cook'): voted 5 stars [*****].

May life treat you kindly, may your troubles evaporate, may you "survive and thrive".

Why are 'you' married? and why haven't you told your husband what you are doing? you claim you don't want to hurt him, but arn't you hurting him every time you fuck someone else and he gets nothing or sloppy seconds or thirds, isn't that hurting him? do you really think waiting for the right moment will help your husband forgive you for humiliating him? No Melisa, you are just another cheating wife trying to find lame reasons why you cheat on the person you claim to love. The only way your husband will ever forgive you for what you have done to him is if he is the kind of man who is a pathethic willing cuckold. In which case you have nothing to fear he will love to know you fuck anything with a pulse.

UTTER SHITE DOES THIS WRITER PORTRAY MEN BRAINDEAD AN HOW COME SLUTS NOT CAUGHT DISEASAES OR AIDS .POOR KIDS GOT MOTHERS FROM HELL

WORST STORY EVER I SMOKE FAT COCK WHY DID I READ THIS MY BUTTHOLE GETS REAMED WHORE SHOULD GET AIDS SPITROAST ME PLEASE

Men don't get it. The one time I stepped out of the marriage we were separated but I still feel guilty. I struggle not to do it again. Loved this series

This is what is wrong with the world today! I love sex on a very regular basis just like most people, but not at the expense of every thing I hold dear! Are you honstly telling us that you don't have enough self control to not cheat! You are even aware how bad it could fuck up your life and still can't control it!? I just don't understand that!? I guess I never will! I know what temptation is like, we all have it! I don't even think it makes me a strong person to be able to control it! It's just the way it is! Self control is something to take pride in! If you are not in control of your own person then I'm afraid you have more problems then cheating! How can you even get by on a daily basis withouth self control! It just doesn't make sense how people play russian roulette with their lives all because they can't teach themselves discipline! Why would you not try to improve that if it controls your life so much???

How can you live with yourself? Oh that's right you're a cheap slut who doesn't have any kind of love for her husband or KIDS!!! Sorry but I'm just being honest! Nobody that loves their KIDS would do that to their family! You must be a real piece of work! Damn I feel sorry for that poor bastard who is supposed to be your husband! You are the worst kind of woman out there and it will eventually blow up in your face!

While of course this caveman theory is fictional, it is believable enough to explain why some people just cannot stay faithful to their significant other. Why some women are sluts and nympho's (lol I know it's only a story). I hope you intend to write future chapters of this story, as there is so much more to write about! VERY HOT story!

Do you really think that the husband is a rumbling, stumblin' idiot? That he really doesn't know anything? When you get served, maybe you'll realize that NO man is that stupid. And no man wants to be married to a slut like you. Wave bye bye to your marriage.

Each chapter has been very satisfying. I appreciate your efforts and look forward for more to cum! I will be on the look out to meet the equivalent to marriedmelissa or her sister Robin in my area! Big SMILE!

Can you do chapter 7 when both husbands find out about the affairs they wives been having for years.

wife gets everything no matter what she does

there is only reward for her to cheat, no punishment

better to keep her as a whore and look elsewhere for fulfillment then to pay her to fuck around anyway

Seems like you need to finish the story. To much bullshit and no ending. Hope you are not trying to make a living writing.

The score was the first hint. One stars!