All Comments on 'The Chase Ch. 01'

by thealphamale

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chesthairslavechesthairslavealmost 11 years ago
'What Sucks Is That He Was Right.'

Your new story of Griffin and Chase is going to be hot and insightful. The soulful motifs you're weaving throughout the chapter are finely executed. Early relationships provide such optimistic joy and sadly cause us to avoid similar hurts for years when they terminate. We also avoid potential opportunities. Again you've enticed and teased the reader into another of your character driven stories and steamy sex. I look forward to taking this ride of longing, lust, and love with you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A good and promising beginning

I too am looking forward to the way this story develops, and anxiously awaiting the chapters to come. Good work.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 11 years ago

Can't wait to see how this develops

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