by TheTallDarkTruth
This was honestly very hot and very well written. The only thing that would've made it better is if was longer, or had more chapters. I would've very much liked to see what happened next.
A great scenario, which could have easily run for a number of chapters, even after she had been punished the production of the choreography sheet could have placed three further girl's in a rather painful position and would explain the errors she had made.
so fucking hot! i came and moaned loud as fuck! i never have moaned to porn or anything before this story! i love it
Really good form, good characters, great build-up. But a real tease. Just too short.
The quality of your grammar is really top-notch. The correct use of the subjunctive mood, the proper use of "lay," I could go on. I hate it when I see awful grammar on here, so nice job.
This is a great story. As was your previous entry, also a favorite. Your efforts are appreciated.
Please continue ... maybe enslave cheer bitch captain too. Jane sandwich...yummy!
I love the fact that they're all hot. People like attractive people, makes everything better.
For God's sake, each of you take a hole and let's make her cheer.