by BlewWater69
Number 20 is worth the wait. Liked the drama with Beth and the transformation of Haden. If this is being published as a book, please ask them to provide a copy editor so that the several instances of wrong word use (of for off, etc.) are fixed. This has been a good read and you deserve to be presented well.
You said you would post it right after part 1 and we've yet to get it!
I like how your making the turmoil with Beth. Although I do hope they work out! Hurry lusting after Part 2!
At first I expected this to be another repetitive jerk fest but am pleased with the the high standard of the writing and WANT TO SEE HOW IT ENDS :) MORE PLEASE :)