All Comments on 'The Chesswoman Ch. 02'

Talk about a blast from the passed when I saw the title for this, I instantly remembered chapter 1 from years ago and was happy to see it again.

I said it then and I’ll say it now, good start, this story has some great potential.

I hope I don’t have to wait another 4 years for the next chapter.

3+ years and you picked up nicely. Keep going...Please don't make us wait again!

I have to agree with the previous two commenters. Great story so far. Please don't make us wait another three years for the next chapter. I would also like to know who all of the chesswomen are.

Looking forward to the next chapters, keep it up

Great story well worth the wait. And I'll join the others in begging you to not make us wait years for the next part

I like your idea of crafting the perfect harem of movie stars. The magic spells are cool and let you take the story in many many different directions if you want. This chapter focused a little too much on Nick, in my opinion though.

Looking forward to seeing who else joins the list. Hopefully Jack gets comfortable with more than one woman at once. ;)

Pretty good story. I hope you have a really good list for this harem you're sharing with us - Kristen Kreuk and Mila Kunis should definitely make the cut. :)

Please don't make your readers wait another 4 years to continue the story. I won't even remember it exists by then :(

Write more chapters

Looking forward to more of your story. Something new is always fun to read

You lost me when she was grinding into his groan!!