All Comments on 'The Chief Pt. 02'

This story is hotter than Georgia asphalt!!! Cannot wait for next chapter and to see Joanne get feminized and FUCKED!!! Write soon.... Soooooooo Good!!!

I'M A GIRLEY BOY NO FEAR

I LIKE MEN WHO FUCK MY REAR!

HE'S THE CHIEF AND HE AIN'T CRASS

HE'LL JAM COCK RIGHT UP MY ASS

SOUND OFF--ONE TWO!

SOUND OFF--THREE FOUR!

can't wait for more and how your sister does her magic on turning this gay sissy nice and feminine for her man

more chapters this great 5 stars

I simply can't find the words to tell you how bad this was.

Really enjoyed it looking forward to the next chapter

I like the story. I have felt some of these feelings before. He, oh pardon me, SHE is feeling things that are confusing. But yet her destiny is becoming clear to her. Anxious for the next installment

Interesting story. The language (verb tense, punctuation, phrasing) is much better than many stories. But the proofreading still missed where the Chief grew up: was it Chicago or Mississippi? Waiting to enjoy reading about Joanne's cosmetician experience.

"To the tune of Anchors Aweigh"

ASSHOLES GET SPREAD-MY BOYS!

ASSHOLES GET SPREAD!

BIG COCKS GET SHOVED RIGHT IN

AND CUM SHOOTS IN, IT'S SAID

this is a really nice story , i cant wait to read more ,well done you ,x

Love your story, It so reminds me of the man that so turned me, helped me become the girl i wanted to be

Great story. Dressing pretty is so much fun. I love wearing pretty dresses.