All Comments on 'The Choice: Silver and Gold'

Really good Science Fiction. A little too descriptive in the beginning, kind of wordy, but once it got going, a terrific ride with involving characters. Thank you so much!

Incredible piece. SPASIBO

Dmitry in Seattle

But alas, it suffered from a lot of problems. Poor flow and confusing breaks in scenes. Poorly written, though there were only a few outright grammatical flaws in it. I'm not being hateful here, I'm saying it needed a proper editor.

Likewise the writer stands a good chance, with more practice, of really being able to whip up some great stuff.

Awesome, very exciting chapter. Who would imagine what fun a garden could be. Oh wait, you did imagine it. Thanks!