All Comments on 'The Choosing Ch. 03'

Please keep it coming, Nadar is soooo hot! Please, pretty please?

Your story is easy to read, you have the knack of drawing in your readers with such intriguing characters and a storyline that flows so well that before you know it you are at the end of the chapter and looking for more!

Keep up the good work!

I really love the story you are weaving....I can't wait for the next chapter

This is mystery intrigue and I like it! So she's not just perpetually in heat, she actually does discriminate. Two hot men, one dark and one light, both pulling her in. Hmm, which one is the good guy and which one is the bad guy?

I am enjoying this story even though you are holding back the answers I want! I don't like any of the characters besides Nadar and her. The others are obviously not good and all have selfish reasons for what they do down to the maid. I can't wait fo rmore.

Your prose style is sensual but never cloying. I love tightly controlled but lush erotica and you do it so very well. This is one of the most enjoyable series I've read since discovering literotica. Thank you for freely sharing your writing here.

...and my curiosity soars! I'm sorry this comment isn't as elaborate as my previous one, but I'm gripped with the desire to continue! To be honest, I'm more curious about the connection to the Silver Master than anything else. But that's what you want me to be curious about, isn't it? ^^