The Choosing Ch. 03

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Sorry it took so long to post this chapter. I was a big doofus who twice submitted it formatted incorrectly. (sorry editor people) If you'd like to be kept informed of when the next chapter appears you can contact me via feedback with your email and I'll put you on the list.

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SilenciaSilenciaover 7 years ago
The plot thickens...

...and my curiosity soars! I'm sorry this comment isn't as elaborate as my previous one, but I'm gripped with the desire to continue! To be honest, I'm more curious about the connection to the Silver Master than anything else. But that's what you want me to be curious about, isn't it? ^^

lusherlusherabout 13 years ago

Your prose style is sensual but never cloying. I love tightly controlled but lush erotica and you do it so very well. This is one of the most enjoyable series I've read since discovering literotica. Thank you for freely sharing your writing here.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

I am enjoying this story even though you are holding back the answers I want! I don't like any of the characters besides Nadar and her. The others are obviously not good and all have selfish reasons for what they do down to the maid. I can't wait fo rmore.

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 14 years ago
Really intriguing!

This is mystery intrigue and I like it! So she's not just perpetually in heat, she actually does discriminate. Two hot men, one dark and one light, both pulling her in. Hmm, which one is the good guy and which one is the bad guy?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

I really love the story you are weaving....I can't wait for the next chapter

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