All Comments on 'The Chosen One'

I knew you wouldn't let Nadia just live in peace. Kick her ass Kevin.

This was pretty good, can't wait to see what happens next.

More action to come. Waiting on bated breath. Is it too soon to beg for ch. 2. I'll be patient. I will wait. Until then 5 stars times infinity.

You said this was a long chapter yet I read thru it like a breeze. So we have 2 groups of bad guys after Kevin, one we know about and the other you are teasing us with. I know in the end Kevin will win but I can already tell this is going to be one great adventure. And with Kevin future wife and child to fight for the stakes have risen. But also knowing that Adam and Kris will always have his back, well let the fight begin.....bring on chapter 2 I'm ready......

Oh yeah! Let's kick some ass, baby! Maybe kiss some too!

---morning coffee. "I think I'll have it black, I've already had the cream." A classic line!!!! :)

I expect chapter two in the next 5 minutes - get typing my dear friend - LOL

Not even a BUDS short story? Sorry but the idea of Kevin breezing through BUDS and the instructors flipping out is kind of amusing in theory. Excellent as always.

THANK YOU FOR THINKING OF ME. IT'S GREATLY APPRECIATED. THIS WAS THE FIRST OF MANY GREAT CHAPTERS TO COME I KNOW. I WILL BE WAITING AND CHECKING DAILY. I'M GLAD THAT YOU'RE KEEPING THE TEAM AROUND FOR AWHILE LONGER. I LOVE THOSE NAVY SEALS. ACTUALLY I JUST LOVE A MAN IN A UNIFORM WITH MULTIPLE STARS AND BARS ON HIS SHOULDER.

KEEP IT COMING.

There is a God after all!