All Comments on 'The Chosen Pt. 02'

Fantastic story and hope you keep going with it.

Great story bud, I like that is not just like every other story, but I do hope you tell more of the point and plan of the nanites, so far it's only been spread and control, I hope you introduce more depth in that area, til then looking forward to the next chapter

Loved part 2 can't wait for more . Thank you for the story it is a great read .

This keeps getting better and better! Now that Julie knows that Emma is fucking Matt, hopefully there will be a threeway the next time Matt goes over!! Five stars and a favorite point!

time to visit his daughter.

on the way. Love to combination of incest and mind control. Very enjoyable read!!

I like this story. I'm hoping for more, many chapters more.

She was 15 years old 3 years ago so she should be 18 by now. And with Matt fucking all his female relatives she should be his next target.

Nanites may suppress the host's jealousy, but not mine. lol

Stephen may have fun with Julie, but no sharing Emma. (unrealistic expectation, I know)

Not as good as the 1st chapter, but I like it a lot. AAAA+++++

All my comments on Pt 1 still stand. I still am on tether hooks to learn what the grand scheme for the Chosen is . . . .