by juderboy
the grocery store...
Did you post this somewhere years ago under some other name?
It's all too familiar to be new.
of a good story but you failed to develop the plot. The ending is simply too abrupt.
he says he likes, how does he treat someone he hates? Fucking his wife and leaving him with a bastard child to care for, Wow, what a great friend.
I guess some people might think this was erotic. I think they are the same guys who write about the same shit. It's a very small club.
I don't know why those other readers don't relax and just enjoy the story...
The whole church/christian aspect of the story just makes it more fun. Being naughty is so much better for someone who's been taught to be good all her life!
Juderboy you have a good story but you need soem help and work on your spelling get yourself an editor and have him or her to spell check your work and maybe you will do better.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga
Morals aside, I do like how she treated you.
Especially you just "sliding your hungry cock" into her pussy. She didn't stop and likely knew, as an adult, entering a man's bed would give him permission to have sex with her.
Her being there with the guy, playing with his cock, seeing, touching and tasting the precum, and going down on him and sucking his penis,..... a woman doing that gives a guy clear signals she wants him.
Before continuing reading, could see her laying on top of the guy, much like a man would mount a virgin girl and prepare to enter her sweet pussy.... and visualized her moving her body up and down as his hard cock thrust into her unprotected pussy.
Then I read this part of the story:
"....She walked over to the bed, removed her robe, picked up the sheet, and climbed her naked body into my bed.
She didn't say a word. She gripped my cock and found it hard as last night.
She climbed on top of me and slid my unprotected cock into her pussy....."
God... that must've been so sexy, her entering his bedroom and "guiding" his cock into her warm, wet pussy.
"....I looked on in amazement as she rode up and down on my cock. She moaned and tossed her head back and forth. She looked me right in the eye and said that she always loved being on top. Her orgasm was shattering. She was in control but clearly didn't want gentle sex... I rolled her over onto her hands and knees and really pounded her pussy..."
That's what a man needs to do.... take-over the woman and make her subservient to his hungry cock after he was for a brief time under her control.
"Missionary sex" is ideal for that and she, a Christian woman, remained subservient to him.
All in all, a very hot story and can see myself in the guy's position being approached by a sexually interested woman.
she is a fucking whore and he is a backstabbing pices of shit and they both deserve the worst that life has available for each of them.
Cantbuyme is once again being a complete ass. He reads stuff he knows he won't like, then posts nasty remarks. He seems to hate everything he reads. So we should ask ourselves why he bothers to read anything at all. I'd call him a bunch of nasty names and tell him I'd like to meet him face to face, but what good would that do? Anyone with a brain the size of a peanut wouldn't undertand what I was talking about anyway.
So, Cantuyme, drop dead and please do it soon.
i dont have to like the characters to read a story. and in the real world you actually have to read the entire story to see if you like it. i will take a look at a lot of writing and i reserve the right to say a character is a fucking ass or a cheating whore and that is what happens to those of us who publish rather than complain. we take it and keep publishing. so the characters in this one deserve the worst the world has to offer. or do you cheer for every character in every book, or movie, or play you have seen? i dont. and from the looks of the score on this one not many people liked it. you do, well good for you. you are entitled just like i am.
I like how she showed you her "Christian love..."
You did a good job describing the events of the two of you coming together.
"....I used my other hand to lift her gown and expose her naked ass to my hard cock. I continued to spoon her. I continued to massage her breast and nipple.
"...And I worked my cock between her closed legs. I most have hit the right spot because she moaned again and opened her legs a bit. The second I had enough working room I slid my cock into her pussy. ..."
Telling how she didn't try to stop you when you gave-into your instincts and moved your impressive cock deep into her.
It went in slowly and I imagine she looked lovingly deep into your eyes as she knew what was happening.
She moved her lips to your's and kissed you even more passionately as she felt your unprotected nonChrsitian penis filling her good-girl Christian pussy, which she was giving completely to you.
Imagine she held you even tighter as she felt you fill her pussy with your spermy cum.
THE NEXT NIGHT:
"....She walked over to the bed, removed her robe, picked up the sheet, and climbed her naked body into my bed. She didn't say a word. She gripped my cock and found it hard as last night.
".....She climbed on top of me and slid my unprotected cock into her pussy. "
She was being a devoted Christian woman, taking you (again) like that.
"...I looked on in amazement as she rode up and down on my cock...."
Amazing how this good Christian girl wasn't so uptight about sex and clearly wanted your penis to conquer her.
Her riding you hard as you pounded her pussy with her on top clearly showed she wanted you.
"... She moaned and tossed her head back and forth. She looked me right in the eye and said that she always loved being on top. Her orgasm was shattering. She was in control but clearly didn't want gentle sex. "
Though you didn't share her religious beliefs, she wanted to "broaden" her experiences a bit and see what it felt like to be fucked by a bad-boy like you and to take your seed into her unprotected pussy.
"....I rolled her over onto her hands and knees and really pounded her pussy..."
You did just what she wanted.
"....she was loudly shouting her approval of my pounding. She came several times that way before I filled her pussy with more of my seed...."
The good Christian girl clearly enjoyed you fucking her.
Can visualize her on top of you and ravishing your godless nonChristian penis.
She likely craved the feeling of your ungodly spermy cum filling her as you conquered her Christian pussy, which was now all your's.
Though Christians are often viewed as having hang-ups about sex, she showed you how many crave it.
She desired your cock in her to fulfill her in a way her man couldn't.
It was, after all, the "Christian" thing to do.