All Comments on 'The Chronicles of Cordelia Pt. 02'

Baby talk.

There's no "baby talk" in this. If you're referring to the use of "Daddy"... you may be reading the wrong genre for your tastes then.

This was well-written, certainly better than the first one. Practice makes perfect... keep practicing, Maverick.

Love the story and annony!!!! He's just an old ugly fat fag who can't get laid

I don't know what the first person to comment was thinking they were going to see in a "Daddy/Daughter" story, but it was obviously not their style, I can't help that but comments like that aren't exactly helpful or useful to anyone.

I appreciate the support from the other users, and Chapter 3 is submitted - Chapter 4 is mostly written & Chapter 5 is planned and being storyboarded in my head. These things don't always go smoothly, however... what I had planned for Chapter 3 ended up being Chapter 4 because the groundwork for it led to an entirely new chapter.