All Comments on 'The Chronicles of Thett Ch. 01'

Lots going on in this first chapter- Cree is an interesting character/villianess (?) and Thett is a symapthetic hero. Looking forward to seeing further chapters!

Both Thett and Syanay deserve whats coming to them, since they are much too naive and easy to manipulate, as if they didn't have a will or principles of their own. Example: Syanay wants to risk her life to kill Dennacor, but when she is alone with him, he can threaten her into marriage. Another odd thing is the use of the word "love": Thett obviously *doesn't* love Cree, although he has sex with her, and it seems doubtful whether Cree loves anyone but herself.

Please keep up the good work.