All Comments on 'The Church Lady Comes to my Door'

haha I hope you set the ending for a sequal. I liked this story alot.

Excellent. Hard to believe it wasn't written by a women!

Well crafted and kept me going right past the first page. Can't wait for your next effort.

Loved the story, and while the very ending wasn't expected, the turn of heart was -- and you did it beautifully. Thanks for a wonderful story.

Terriffic story! I hope that you're working on the sequel and the sequel's sequel. Oh, and the sequel to that.

Minimum three parter.

Because this is so perfect it should be just left as it is. What will she do with Misti that would be so different? It's the perfect story in the round now. Just loved it. I was fed and watered superbly by this writer's craft. What is it with these 51 - 60 year old men that they can turn out such fine erotic fiction? (You and Bigrimmstales should join up - I've discovered his tales and they make my pussy pulse too!!)

NOW THAT WAS HOT MAYBE THE NEXT ONE WILL BE HOTTER

Yes I have to agree, that was one very good story!

Man you gotta finish this . It's to hott not too

Love this story, and the way you left it so that it could continue was awesome. I'd love to see if Misti knows what she and Belle did and if this is going to tun into a threesome. Again very well written.

Reyna is my new favorite vixen! Keep the flame!

- Writerotica

really excellent start carry on and let us know how Reyna got on with misti and if belle comes back and it would be good if she got with misti as well

You've got to let us know how it went with Misti. Did Belle send her or was it a coincidence? Reyna is such a vamp....Hope to read more about her.

...just leave us hanging? Well I hope you continue this series. The thought of Misti, and Belle going at it and Renya jumping for a threeway gets my knickers in a whirl.

mix of manipulative seduction and touching love story. Your writing is sooo readable.

I have to agree with other comments, a seduction of Misti would be quite satisfying. Of course, it would be a purer seduction and leave her wanting more. Then, when she finally returns after resisting for weeks, she finds her seducer and best friend, Belle, waiting for her.

It doesn't take a grrrrreat imagination to see where that will lead. Please, please, lead on.

I hope there is a sequel in the making-- I have to know what happens with Mitsi and Reyna. . .and Belle?

Please continue writing the second part of the church lady cums again! We all want to read what happens. Next time I think part 3 should include the trio of Belle, Misty and Reyna and their adventures, not only here at home but how about shopping for lingerie at Victoria's Secret and the innocent sales lady? The possibilities with this story line are endless, and could be a great novella! Keep up the good writing! Thanks!

Fantastic story! One of my favorites! Please write a follow up or 2 or 10', whatever. Just write the damn sequels already!!! :D

Ok I read a lot and your story was one of the best,PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING,

and I won't stop reading....:-)

Wonderful story. Next, a rough seduction of Misti, then a threesome. In any case Cabone there need to be more stories from you.

There are soooo many chapters that could be written here! Belle comes back? What happens with Misti? How about the rest of the Young Married Ladies Sunday School Class? Couldn't they start meeting mid-week at Reyna's house for studies in Church Doctrine with emphasis on close association between the wives of church officers, Deacon's wives, Pastor's and Associate Pastor's wives. They'd have to spend a lot of quality time together. You have such a warped mind, but they love each other! Belle just has to have time to decide what her lifestyle is going to be. Keep On.

OMG! This story was sooooo HOT! the best that I have ever read. you just MUST continue on.....

do they continue there love affair?

Did Belle send Misti?

i really loved this story and i just hope that you will please make more this was one of the best stories ive ever read

Wow, Avery hot story indeed!

Thank you!

L

"Daddy doesn't live here and my Mom isn't here!" There's an old saying in the British army (and probably something similar in others): Bullshit Baffles Brains. And what a wonderful bullshitter Reyna is with her seduction techniques. Poor Belle didn't stand a chance falling into that particular honey-trap. Reyna's wiles had me laughing aloud in parts of this story. As for the final paragraphs, a great twist in the tale. This story is just perfect as it stands and I really think a sequel might spoil it.

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!!

Wow! You really have "the Voice". A lovely, wonderful seduction story fully of tenderness. You nailed it - a 5 star story. Pls. keep it up!

Seduction stories are my favorite. The Church Lady is perfect, nicely written, no trashy talk.

I know that you have been a prolific writer & this was done some time ago, but if you ever get back to writing, please continue this. I've read, re-read & re-read this again, as it's so well written & so smoothly moves along.

Personally I could see at least 4 more chapters.

Misti's seduction.

Misti & Bella get together.

Misti, Bella & Rayna together.

Bella moves in to Rayna's & maybe an Epilogue too

Lovely work, book marked for future ref, as is all your work

I made a mistake earlier I was unaware that you had already written chapter 2. However after reading it I still hope you are going to write a chapter 3. 😱💰

This was so damn sexy. I think I need a cigarette now.

Part 2 please need it

Wow very sexy and well written made me cum twice thanks hope to read the rest of the story

I mean, seriously, I just could _not_ get it out of my head that she was seducing the neighborhood evangelist.

Lesbian seduction stories I have ever read. The little twist at the end cries out for a 3 some. The characters were well drawn and the dialog was very engaging. Can't wait to read some more of your stories. (Are you really a straight guy writing lesbian seduction???)

Had me right up until the epilogue. Should have just stopped at “wondering if I’d ever see her again”

I’ll go with “Loved it until the end.” A wonderful, hopeful story, utterly killed by the section after ‘wondered if I’d ever see her again.’ Not sure what the thought process was here, but you could improve this story immensely by killing everything after the *****

I discovered this story recently and I absolutely loved it, right up until the epilogue. I was hoping that Belle had returned, not someone that Belle had sent.

I know this story is going on 7 years old, but please follow-up to it. I would love, love, love to see another chapter with Belle. There seemed to be an emotional connection there.

is there part 2 if not please make part 2.

I loved this story. It was erotic, full of feeling and so naughty! Very well written if a few little glitches but nothing detracted from its relentless eroticism. Loved the ending too - you can play MISTI for me any time!

I really enjoyed reading this story and hope we will be able to read more about Reyna and Belle hope they become a couple and they love each other and maybe marry. It was fantastic story you are a brilliant writer have you other stories I can read please Cabone. xxx

When I first to read “erotic” Stories, this was one of first that I read and I was hooked, after reading it. Since then, I have read quite a few more. But this story is still in my top five favourites. It has even helped inspire me to write my own story, with thoughts for others, based on the style of this one.

If you haven’t read this story yet, I’ll just say, that it is a seduction story. Which is both imaginary and descriptive enough to paint a picture. You’ll have fun reading this story, because it is written in a fun and enjoyable style.

TOTALLY PHUKKIN' HOTTTT!!!!!!

I NEED MOREEEEEEE

SO hot...loved the way she explored her own body, then Reyna's

the lingerie she's wearing...over the top

and of course she dove into her shower instant she got home...wouldn't do to have the 'perfume' on her from having her face in another women's business

know from reading comments no follow-up...pity, and the one comment re a 3sum with Misti-intriguing

Absolutely fabulous! No qualifications or explanations, just simply one of the most enjoyable, fun examples of lesbian erotica on this site. And the twist (or kink if you will) at the end was great! Five stars for me, and you're now on my favorites list!

Sublime

(adjective, of such excellence, grandeur, or beauty as to inspire great admiration or awe.)

Thank you for that raw, sexy, sensual, beautiful story!

Really great story, yes certainly one of the best and with that twist, thanks +++

dynamic! You had my full attention from the beginning. The ending hook is fantastic. Loved the story.

1st fucking class. 😂 😂 😂 😂

My favourite character ever on this site is Belle -- I love love LOVE her innocence... shed while receiving & giving pure love. . . More, please!

Well written and super exciting.

loved it................

A totally lovely and loving seduction. Thank you!!

Absolutely riveting and so erotic. More please!

I loved it. It was as if I was right there with you both.

Amazing! I just love the innocence and the teaching. Please continue :)

Play Misti for me.

I think it's game on, let's play turn be turned or burned. Hmmm

I love it!

Ah, sigh, one of those stories that makes me wish I could experience things from a woman's point of view.

Brilliant, sexy, moving story ... 5 stars only, because that was all I could give you!

This is also a GREAT story!

Are you planning a Book 2 and Book 3? Because I can see the plot.

This is a very nice story and I would like to read more.

I really appreciate your ability to create a strong and overwhelming erotic atmosphere. The story is excellent, although I lack more detailed descriptions of the intimate encounters.

Good story!

Thank you!

The way it ended... Hilarious.

Top Ten, wonderful story! No sequel, let your imagination lead your mind and your hands.