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dozendozenalmost 7 years ago
Great story ...

.... even though I have trouble keeping track of so many characters.

One problem, you occasionally switch from third person to first person. Is this perhaps autobiographical?

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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