All Comments on 'The City Pt. 03'

Are you going to leave us with a big gap again?

Yep - just one story every two years! No promise I will try to do better!

Marvelous. Although it was boring and over kill at some points in the story, it was well worth the extra effort to read it in it's entirety. My God you filled me with such pleasure and I could visualize everything. In particular the part where Jess first encounters the giant flower and tears off her own panties. It made me thirsty and desperate in a way that actually felt good and made me feel alive! Thank you!

P.S. I want more!

Great stories, all of them, but your grammar/syntax/punctuation errors are distracting.

Brilliantly written and hope you have more stories of these people and the lost city hope we will not wait to long for next chapters please nova2469 loved every minute reading these chapters. xxx thank you