All Comments on 'The Claiming of Marisa'

A liitle bit too corny at the end for my taste, but overall a good story, nice crafted and original. Five stars. JBE

For those who have read The Newly Divorced Resort, I wrote this as part of her back story, but took it out because it disrupted the focus on her and William. Her naïveté and puppy love was intentional to show why she allowed her ex to set the tone in their relationship for so long: she felt she owed him.

Thanks for reading!