All Comments on 'The Clan Wars Pt. 20'

MY ONLY CRITICISM IS WHEN AUTHORS FINISH A LONG TALE THAT THEY CREATE A FINAL STORY WITH ALL THE CHAPTERS COMBINED INTO ONE.

I don't think literotica lets you do that - they'd block it for posting the same content twice. Not sure, though. Happy to be corrected.

Come on man, one more chapter.

That Epilogue was too short, just tell us what happens after that...

What happens to the Redtooth Clan after Grotag assumes the mantle of Chieftain? I'm guessing that his incestuous coupling with his sister, Kami, produces fruit, but what of the clan as a whole?

And what happens to Trabba after her self imposed exile from the tribe? I assume that a very fit silver vixen/cougar orc warrior woman could land on her feet and do quite well in this setting.

As for favorite elements, Mila and her voracious sexual appetite and loose morals definitely rate up there. Also, the casually incestuous relationship with Grotag and Kami is my jam. Are these kind of couplings common only in the Redtooth Orc tribe, or are orcs everywhere in this setting comfortable with fun for the whole family? Would Mila, if she were to settle down and start a family, be tempted to ride her son's cock if he showed interest in her?

You is awesome

You is filthy

You is perfect

Aw shucks! Thanks!

After this, will you write a new story?

Please your the best on literotica

I immensely enjoyed your story. It had the plot, the sex, kinkyness everything. The epilogue, however was too short in my humble opinion. It's your story, you can finish it any way you want. But please write another chapter if you can. It would be awesome if the gang dispersed with bang to remember. An orgy containing all of them.

Anon: The story isn't over, just the first book.

Mila, Dayna, Bann, Pointer and the rest of the gang will return. I'm working on the next part, I'm just busy with work and whatnot so I don't have as much time as I'd like to write.

Thanks for the positive feedback!

Thank you for the interesting characters and story. I started for the sex, of course, but got engrossed in the tale. Bravo!

A truly excellent story, although I must admit some despair that a sequel will happen after this long. I do hope you will be able to return some day

"Anon: The story isn't over, just the first book."

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