All Comments on 'The Cleopatra'

No way he talks his way out f being arrested under those circumstances. No way she gets fisted like that and does anything but go to the hospital to get stitches to repair the damage. And, well, you get the idea. WAY too implausible and unbelievable even for a fictional story. UGH!

Thanks for your comment, Anon. All of the events in the story happened to me or someone I know, though granted, not on the same night!! But "John's" luck really does stretch the limits of believability on a regular basis. He's a fun guy to have around :-)

I have known some bad luck magnets :-p

And fisting is entirely possible without injury, if you take your time and ESPECIALLY with a smaller female hand. Just because you haven't done it, doesn't mean it's impossible. Fisting is scary to many people, but OMG what an intense experience to watch.

Well done Eve! I gave you a 5 out of 5

Thank you PsuedeONyhm, I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story!

That is scorching hot!